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Mirror's don't lie

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A reluctant truth...admitting being overweight!
#SixWordStories' Theme Prompt: Reluctant truth

I struggle with my weight constantly and I rarely look in a mirror because I can't stand what it shows me and my lack of progress.s
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I like how it feels as if the person is coming to the reluctant truth at the beginning with the ellipses and so on, and then it eventually just bursts out from the person at the end, especially with the use of the exclamation mark emphasising the point there.

Great stuff! I like the context and how that is given to us with the title and all.